http://chapbook.disqus.com/Modern web-based poetry editorenSat, 09 May 2009 10:08:36 -0000http://poetry.herokugarden.com/poems/151#comment-9157164<p>I know I'm a brat about rhetorical questions, but consider how strong the ending would be if you changed the last line to "It might be you" or something like that.</p>justindzSat, 09 May 2009 10:08:36 -0000