http://chapbook.disqus.com/Modern web-based poetry editorenSun, 05 Jul 2009 19:50:37 -0000http://poetry.herokugarden.com/poems/160#comment-12181534<p>Great opening lines. I think the first stanza is the best.</p>justindzSun, 05 Jul 2009 19:50:37 -0000