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Re: '"Apathy," he wrote.'

Karen Chaffee — Sat, 11 Apr 2009 03:29:24 -0000

An excellent question formed as poetry.

Re: '"Apathy," he wrote.'

mXe — Fri, 03 Apr 2009 19:43:35 -0000

Haha. It does answer the question. I will edit it in just a moment. I sort of just included it in there as a reminder that's the sort of focal point.

Re: '"Apathy," he wrote.'

justindz — Thu, 02 Apr 2009 19:07:44 -0000

You know. The title answers the question. I know I'm always telling you to try chopping stuff, but try chopping that last line ;-). I like the flow in the first four lines a lot. Especially three and four.