DISQUS

Chapbook: '"Apathy," he wrote.'

  • justindz · 9 months ago
    You know. The title answers the question. I know I'm always telling you to try chopping stuff, but try chopping that last line ;-). I like the flow in the first four lines a lot. Especially three and four.
  • mXe · 9 months ago
    Haha. It does answer the question. I will edit it in just a moment. I sort of just included it in there as a reminder that's the sort of focal point.
  • Karen Chaffee · 8 months ago
    An excellent question formed as poetry.